Actually, in my high school, students are required to wear the school uniforms each day at school. Everyone looks the same to a great extent.【程度的描述】 No one's special. So after a while, we all have the similar physical features. Baggy pants, oversized jackets, and big glasses on our faces, 【生动的描述】of course【自然的语序】. Lucky enough【选取比较自然的连接词】, we had a graduation ceremony, and the high school allowed us to wear something casual 【转换词性】on that very day.
For this special day, I picked up a really nice dress. My mum and I found it at an elegant shopping mall, which was stunning in the store window.【还是细节描写，而且增添了背景故事】 I had my eyes on that dress immediately. It was a pink dress with a black leather belt, which was neither too fancy nor too formal.【加入形容的部分】 It boasts an graceful cutting style with a U-neck shape. Somehow, it reminded me of a typical Chanel dress.【加入了西方文化背景知识】 My mum said it might be too mature for my age, but I believe it was OK.【自然地加入自己的态度和看法】 Now think about it, I guess I was eager to be an adult at the time, so wearing a dress that pretty could significantly improve my confidence as a 18-yr-old young lady. Besides, the color was perfect for my skin tone.
Actually, a look is never finished without the right accessories.【除了衣服以外增加一些小细节，有助于丰富所描述的整体内容】 I chose to wear the pearl necklace and a really nice pair of beige 【稍微“高级”一点点的词汇就可以】leather shoes. Not surprisingly, I got more than my fair share of compliments 【地道的描述方式】at the graduation ceremony on that day.